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highwayman
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa

0 posted 2000-01-06 12:31 PM


As I set here
About to sleep
It's in my pillow
That I weep.
Becouse You are
So far away,
I miss You more,
And more each day.
You have my heart
You have my mind
You have my love
So always be kind.
I hope that soon
You can feel the rain
That is my love
To ease your pain.
I want you happy
And in my arms
My love to you
Means no harm.
You are my love
You are my life
Stay with me forever
To end our strife.
You know that
We're ment to be
I am the "pod"
And your the "pea"


 

© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
highwayman
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa
1 posted 2000-01-06 12:39 PM


Julie sweety, this one is for you.  I hope that You get the meaning of the way that I feel. I love you, I know no other way to put it.  That and I want to say thanks.  You have tought me how to love agean when I thought that know one else could.

 

whiskey
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Posts 1278
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2 posted 2000-01-06 12:41 PM


Wow this is wonderful babe thank you so much you know how I feel about you and I know we are two peas in a pod , I like that we are so alike, This poem means alot to me, I love you

Love
Julie (Whiskey)    

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-06-2000).]

Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-06 01:06 PM


Beautiful poem!!  

 Denise


Paul Hoekman
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4 posted 2000-01-07 10:26 AM


TRUE LOVE
NEEDS NO WORDS
YET
YOU TWO ALWAYS
FIND
JUST THE WRITE ONES!
PAUL

Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
Posts 265
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5 posted 2000-01-08 01:41 AM


Wow - this is beautiful Hwyman! Well done : )
highwayman
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa
6 posted 2000-01-08 01:48 AM


Thanks everyone for the wonderful feedback.  I think that love needs many words.  It is a thing that can be expressed in so many ways that no one person can ever put it all into words.  But you know what, I'll keep on trying!!!!!
cokey_95
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 35

7 posted 2000-01-08 01:55 AM


Beautiful...I cant wait to find a love like you have found..
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