Open Poetry #5 |
Real Love |
Richard Junior Member
since 1999-12-27
Posts 35California |
Oh do they have a way Dreams and fantasies of love So true and so real Distance apart is none We love as if Our bodies are one How real our love is |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Real love survives everything, Richard. Short but sweet. Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
richard...that is really deep... are you speaking from experience..? would like to see you write more... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Richard! I guess fantasies are real in a sense. Never thought of it that way before! Denise |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Welcome to Passions, Richard. Love is also bittersweet. B Gravitt |
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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
richard, was really hoping this would be a creation in magic..its truly a work of art..fun type poem... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more from you! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome, welcome, welcome.... |
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Richard Junior Member
since 1999-12-27
Posts 35California |
Thank you Georgia. I appreciate. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome to Passions... ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Enjoyed Richard.....are you who I think you might be?? |
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Jewl_24_1999 Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64USA |
Richard, This was a sweet poem, I enjoyed it very much, I look forward to reading more of your works soon. |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Welcome to Passions, Richard. This is very good. Well done. Jim "If I rest, I rust." - Martin Luther |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I think this is one a lot of us can relate to...welcome to passions |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Welcome to the Passionate Forums. |
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Richard Junior Member
since 1999-12-27
Posts 35California |
As a new member I am still stumbing through the navigation process, so please forgive my tardiness in responding to your kind comments. I thank you all and am looking forward to reading your work. Richard |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And we are looking forward to reading more of yours, Welcome Liz |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Isnt real love such a blessing? Such as your poem is! Great job! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Richard,A very deep poem, enjoyed it much. looking forward to reading more. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Well done Richard. Welcome to Passions. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
I can relate to it. Extremely lovely. ~Astraea "Charms strike the sight but merit wins the soul." |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Welcome to our family. Enjoyed your poem, and hope to see more soon. My poems just seem to annoy people, but I like them. Yours, on the other hand had a comforting feel to it. Thanks for sharing. |
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