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Open Poetry #5

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Kid Pedestal
Junior Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 26
Chandler, Arizona

0 posted 2000-01-05 05:42 PM

I shun to think what would happen
If I was to break that stained glass window of her heart.

My emotions for her bleed profusely on the pavement
of her soul, and my quest to release her burning
desires is never ending.

But how do i decide if this is that right path
for me, for another light sparkles in the corner of my life.

Another light, as beautiful and profound as the first...

I know not which way to go.
Only time stands confident that I will make the
right choice.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 2000-01-05 06:12 PM

Ah kid....sometimes choices are not easy.

Deborah
Junior Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 41

2 posted 2000-01-05 06:50 PM

Choices can be hard, and you are right, often only time will show the right path to you. But sometimes even time can't tell you and all you have to follow is your heart. It is a nice poem, I hope you make the decision best for you and the people involved.
Deborah

jaxjoy
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 112
Texas

3 posted 2000-01-05 07:02 PM

Nice work. Light can be blinding sometimes.

hmm..to follow the heart or the mind?

Dreamer_556
Junior Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 34

4 posted 2000-01-06 02:02 PM

That's lovely!
In answer to Jaxjoy's question.. follow the heart!

~*Dreamer*~

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