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Open Poetry #5

Fearful Choices

Seaangel
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 2000-01-05 05:15 PM

(This was written Christmas Eve, thinking about my life..)

Curling up she said
Trust is for fragile things
to break upon;
Bonding makes blood,
present or promised;
And in future angels weep.
Follow my precepts,
she chanted to herself,
curled up in wet hills of grass;
Watching the silent moon
ease in white ascendency,
and quiet a desperate voice.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-05 05:27 PM

This is so beautiful, Seaangel! Especially the ending!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-01-05 06:13 PM

One word...lovely

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2000-01-05 06:29 PM

You have created quite a mood in just a few words--very well done, I say.

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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4 posted 2000-01-05 06:40 PM

Absolutely gorgeous

A house full of talent you have over there, don't you!

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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