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EnciNo Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 12 |
16 Life at 16 Pleasure and pain Jumbled in a riot Drink to death Death to dorks Mushy crushes Passes Radically Emotionally Repressed Utterly alone Black deathes Fast cars Slow dances Roses and chocolates Love and hate Of smiles and stabs Life at 16: confusing (To Star - 01/16/89) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
loved this! Very tight writing style, concise and accurate of teen years! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, life can be confusing, at any age, but especially in the teen years. You have caputured the turmoil of those years well in this piece! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, so true!!! |
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Felix Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 78USA |
ok i saw this one in the list and thought...oh my gosh somebody is writing about my families favorite number!!! boy was i wrong...LOL. I remember life at 16 (wasn't too long ago for me). You described it very well. I like how this thing says so much yet in so few words. Did you ever read about a frog who dreamed of being a king, and then became one? - Neil Diamond |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
I hear that!! Well done, EnciNo  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I'm not sure if I can remember that far back but it sounds familiar...absolute total confusion!...hmmmmm, still seems the same now..  HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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