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J.B.SR Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 29Seattle area |
[This message has been edited by J.B.SR (edited 01-08-2000).] |
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J.B.SR Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 29Seattle area |
Im guessing this is one of them that i should have kept between me and the one i wrote it for? Im new at this,sorry. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks for sharing and No we love to read about the love you feel god most of my poems are about the same subject as this one so keep posting  Great poem |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very heart felt words...there is no greater distance than that that lays between two hearts. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is so beautiful! Of course you shouldn't have kept it to yourself! Thanks for sharing it! Denise |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
speechless. beautiful. moving. true. sherry |
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J.B.SR Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 29Seattle area |
Thank you for the input.I hope this poem will let her know just how special she really is to me and all that know her |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I loved that poem J.B. In fact, I might write a poem called distant lover. That's also the name of one Marvin Gaye's songs. And I love that song too! Nathan |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great writing! I know what your talking about though. Thanks for sharing! |
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Mary Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 38Delaware, Ohio, USA |
Great poem J.B.SR...I'm glad you decided to share this! It's simply beautiful!! |
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J.B.SR Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 29Seattle area |
Sorry to bring back to the front,but i have a question.How is it that someone can come and change the name of my writings? I had named this "Distant Love" and some how someone has changed the name to "Distant Lover". Who ever has done this,please dont take it upon your self to adjust others work to fit your needs or likings.thank you [This message has been edited by J.B.SR (edited 01-07-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful J.B.SR I can relate to this, beautifully written. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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