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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Day dream " Sky blue Clouds white Laying here Under air Seeing smile Laughter heard Birds fly Over head Sun shines Warm skin Glowing cheeks Grass soft Under skin Heart sings From within Hair Bright Face smooth Soft lips Upon mine Given yours |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
very very sweet, Whiskey - I like it! K '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Methinks this verse likes me. Tranquility strikes me in it. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
Whiskey, You know that I love you. The poem is very good, but don't you think that the subject matter is a little to much for everyone here? I look forward to you being able to show me were this place is!! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
What a picture I see here.....wow  Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
what are you trying to say highwayman! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks everyone for your kind replies Highwayman, I love you too your so clever for guessing the suject matter but then you know me well |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
OKay as it has been pointed out to me my last comment looks a bit strange.....I mean is I see the picture from the Poem in the words......I was not refering to your personal picture Whiskey and Sorry for any misunderstanding that may have happened...LOL But I would never be so bold anyway :0) Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
First Knight you got it all wrong I didnt take any offense to your reply there was nothing wrong with it [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-05-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW! You do paint a lovely picture here! I absolutely love it! (p.s. I didn't misunderstand your first comment, First Knight) Denise |
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