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All I AM
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
This took me a long time to type so please read it. thank you "All I AM" All I am is not all I'll ever be I'm improving daily with no end I see Month by month I travel beyond myself I am creating not only money but a different wealth All I am is not all I'll ever be I'm learning somthing new today just for me Month to month I plan for the next I am not all I am and I'm not complex All I am is not all I'll ever be I'm creating qualities to have as a key Month after month I get older but never old I am full of life and what it may hold All I am is not all I'll ever be I'm freeing myself of all lifes greed Months & months in the past this brought me down I am now free of letting someone control my frowns All I am is not all I'll ever be I am leading the way to always being happy Month by month check yourself and where your at I am going to too just so I never go back All I am is not all I'll ever be I'm everything If I let myself free Month to month I will explore somthing new I am in love with me and I hope not of only few All I am is not all I'll ever be I'm caring about others by knowing me Month after month I'll be closer to new love bounds I am not worried there out there they will be found All I am is not all I'll ever be I'm feeling and it finally agrees Months & months I've wanted to strive I am NOW that someone who knows they are ALIVE!!!!!! < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I'm responding this myself to keep it on top to make sure it gets read. I always seem to read the top one's myself and this is my last one for the night. thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Full of passion and hope, such good things they are, as is this poem. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
We are all evolving on a daily basis. It is good that you know this and that you watch as you change. Enjoy the evolution. |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Bojopy... Very uplifting read, especially for someone into self-excavation (  ). Neat thing about this writing- can manipulate it to suit what you want it to read. I always said "I couldn't give all of me unless I HAD all of me". Your poem certainly brought that philosophy of mine into the forefront. Right on! Great to read something encompassing so much enthusiasm. Sherry |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Thank you for all the responses. It is not my normal writing but I thought it would be uplifting for all readers such as myself who are somtimes depressed........Thanks again |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is wonderful! Very well done, great thoughts! Denise |
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