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Believe in the rainbows that shape all our dreams
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Believe in the rainbows that shape all our dreams |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Believe in the rainbows that shape all our dreams < !signature-->as they dance across the magic of our souls creating light where shadows once existed to fill with wonder what was once an empty hole As icicles drip off the branches of a tree so we're free to roam our hidden fantasies shaken free by the winds across the heart these are the colours of ecstacy Scattered like leaves as they blow across time these colours are our innocent friends delight in them with knowledge of eternal hope weaving dreams that have no beginning and no end Drape your soul with this magical shawl release your spirit with opened curtains let timeless passion create a wonderful glow ending the darkness of a future uncertain The depth of feeling is yours to conceive as you hold the future of destiny within the folds of two loving hearts that soothe the soul with their rhapsody I wonder if you will ever realise That it's not as far as it may seem I wonder if you'll reach out and touch The rainbow of an everlasting dream... Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rainbow, You have touched upon that which I have felt in you and your poetry and your spirit. This is very beautifully written, Rainbow, and I'm sure most poets will understand all you have said here. Thank you for being able to express it. Love ya, Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RG, Beautiful poem, well written and I enjoyed the read. *L* Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is special, Cindy, and so are you! Great poem! Denise |
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agony Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 18 |
Thank you very much for changing the format.I am still new at doing all this by computer.Very nice poem if I might add. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"The rainbow of an everlasting dream.." such a wonderful line. The poem's beauty is surpassed only by your own, Rainbow, come what may.  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
A spectrum of inspiration RG! HuggsZ! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is your best ever! Please submit it to the main site! PLEASE! I love it..  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Elizabeth: You have a way of reading me, whether I write what I feel or just feel it.. HUGS SY: You're just a loveable softie... HUGS Denise: I look at the photographs of your daughter's wedding and know you mean what you say.. HUGS Agony: Gosh, I was feeling a bit worried about doing that...never done it before but it's such a heartfelt poem...good luck! HUGS Bal: In another lifetime, right now you could make me feel like a princess, in another lifetime! HUSG LR: Kaleidescope....certainly.. HUSG PDV: It's too personal but thank you.. HUSG Thanks for your hand..< !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-05-2000).] |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Enjoyed this poem....well said and written....it was as if I was listening to you read it........Bojopy |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I believe in the Rainbow that has draped across my heart.... Beautiful R G .... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Deborah Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 41 |
Wonderful poem, as the others have said. Loved reading it. Deborah |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is very beautiful Rainbow--I keep going back to read it again and find it so very well done. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my... "I wonder if you will ever realise That it's not as far as it may seem I wonder if you'll reach out and touch The rainbow of an everlasting dream..." How very, very beautiful |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
How heartwarming...and beautiful RG. K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well, I read this yesterday and it made me cry, and I went back to read it again today and it made me cry again....gosh RG were you writing this for me....sure seems like it...and yep I agree with hoot that last verse is precious.....sighs and hugs and am glad I came to read again today cause my comment of yesterday is not here...musta done something wrong, lol, I had to take off letting PIP keep my password, as anyone can open my cp, and sometimes I forget to put it in on a comment and it doesn't post...and lol, yes I know if I wasn't so pressed for time and I actually read the screens it would probably tell me that it didn't post but lol, I am off to the next poem in a flash, otherwise I won't get to read them....big hugs for your day RG |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Don't believe Lovey's excuses... we all know that hair keeps blocking her view! LOL This is beautiful, RG... well done!!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you for all your responses.. Pepper: You're beautiful  HUSGHoot, Dreams are funny things, you can choose the ending, unlike life.. HUSGIloveit: You're as soppy as I am.. HUSGSuthern: ROFL@Hair..*g* HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
RG: What a poem, what flow in expression WOW! You weave your way into my heart with those beautful words. Been trying to write something like this, alas I could not manage even a semblance of it. Am not giving up though admiringly, neitham |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Cindy, this poem is beautiful, as you are inside and out, I especially love the line "The Rainbow of an everlasting dream" Beautiful!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Aren't rainbows just the most splendiferous thing? I hear that angels ride upon their crests..... |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Rainbowgirl, I am in complete agreement...wonderful! Tamera |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
"I wonder if you will ever realise it's not as far as it may seem". Such heartfelt poetry. I keep coming back to it. Thank you RainbowGirl. very wonderful indeed. B Gravitt |
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