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My Hraet Belongs To You
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My Hraet Belongs To You |
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agony Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 18 |
For the first time in my life I feel happy inside.My eyes are full of love and I feel no need to hide. My love for you is growing each and every day,the love that you have given me,I could never throw that away. So many people have tried to break this will of mine,so many nights, I have cried,then said "I am just fine." I watched as others played their games and lied about their love,your truth and honesty rang out from above. My heart belongs to you,mylove will never leave,let's make this last forever,and it will if you just believe. BY Tracy Schlieper |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
For the first time in my life I feel happy inside My eyes are full of love and I feel no need to hide My love for you is growing each and every day the love that you have given me I could never throw away So many people have tried to break this will of mine so many nights, I have cried, then said "I am just fine." I watched as others played their games and lied about their love your truth and honesty rang out from above My heart belongs to you my love will never leave let's make this last forever and it will if you just believe... BY Tracy Schlieper I hope you don't mind Tracy, I read this and thought it was lovely but changed the formatting slightly... HUSG Moderators please delete this if Tracy is unhappy with it... Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This format makes it much easier to read! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tracy, your poem is lovely, but RG has a point...sometimes formatting can really help a poem...If you are unhappy with this, let me know....we're all family here and as such, we like to help out...(now if someone would just come over and do my ironing!) LOL Welcome to the family...  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful poem, take heed from RG though, presentation is everything  |
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