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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
One last moment, A precious breath, The deepest sigh, One last request- Love me forever And never forget Our love was real Though we met On the net! |
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Jewl_24_1999 Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64USA |
Well Georgia, I never posted a poem in passions before, but I enjoy coming here and reading the wonderful works of art that these poets create. They challenge my mind, and bring feelings alive. You came to the perfect place to improve on your poetry. I suggest the Poetry workshops. [This message has been edited by Jewl_24_1999 (edited 12-27-1999).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
And for all of us to enjoy! Concise. Your emotion is well known and you evoke response. Bravo! How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
jewl, i thank you for your concern over my poetic prwess..will definitely look into some more schooling..thanks for reading the poem..love ya |
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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
Rebel, i thank you so much for your review of my poem..came from my heart and my experience.. |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Georgie, you did a wonderful job with such a short piece, it is so sweet and so complete. Lovely...  If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Georgia, I like the peice. B Gravitt |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Short, sweet and straight to the point! Very well done! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, Georgia.... Nice to have you here.... |
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Richard Junior Member
since 1999-12-27
Posts 35California |
very well done, Georgia. Short but tender. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Georgia! Beautiful and heartfelt little poem! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Georgia - This poem is PERFECT just PERFECT ! You captured it all ! Wonderful, my dear. WELCOME WITH OPEN ARMS FROM A 'FELLOW-POET' Hope to see many more from your poetic pen. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Welcome to Passions, and your first post is a passionate poem! Liz |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very sweet poem Georgia. Welcome to Passions. I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely! And welcome...  ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
i would like to thank you, one and all for your kind words and encouragement ...you are all very special people ..thank you so much for allowing me to come to passions! |
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