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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Unknown " Close heart Distance long Over sea Under ground Lost to me Found to you Inside light Outside glow Strong sense Eyes slow Mind fast Long wind Second skin Love known Soul kept Inner you Inner me |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I think the subject is a very lucky person. You have succinctly expressed yourself my dear. Very efficient art. I admire it very much.  How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nice! Lovely! Kind of erotic even! Simply beautiful! (and I'm just talking about your picture!)...I'll go back and read the poem now... |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
EASY Toerag!! As you know this forum is awesome, not only to share with other poets that appreciate your work (or your parents,Toerag) but how it makes you feel alive pouring it all out here. Another Beauty Whiskey keep on rockin girl |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Rebel, Thanks it means alot to hear people say they like my poetry Toerag, Thanks for the compliments and I hope you liked the poem too Paul, Thanks for all your replies and Ill keep rockin if you do , BTW did you get my email ? |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Seriously, I do like the way ya wrote the poem sweetie.....and as Paul said, yep...I'm really easy sometimes....okay, most of the time....LOL..... Now then, Paul, but...but...she emails you?....Geesch! I guess ya have a big boat?...Ya both love the sea? Or are ya handsome and suave like me? |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Toerag, I email lots of people you may be next inline , if you keep giving me these compliments |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Whiskey, Lovely poem, dear, and your picture is lovely, too, but only erotic in the mind of the beholder. You are beautiful and so is your poetry. Toerag, let her alone! Liz |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno gal? I've always been a beer drinker but you could drive a man to whiskey! LOL...Are you an Aussie?....That's one place I'd truly love to visit someday....that and or New Zealand.....Hope ya had a great Holiday and keep up the poetry...you're quite good! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Liz, Thanks alot for the compliments I love your poetry too Toerag, Yes I am an aussie, And what holiday would that be ? |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I see that nefarious Toe is never gonna change his ways... still scamming all the e-beauties he can... and you are beautiful too whiskey.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely is the right word, yes very lovely. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Rebel, Thanks You guys have me blushing |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yassee how these guys all chastize me?...Just cuz I complimented a pretty gal?...Ya notice that Paul and L.Rebel didn't say anything about how sweet, kind, good looking, and nice I am?....That's okay...cuz Balladeer loves me, and Suthern thinks I'm an okay guy....and Whiskey might email me some day......LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thanks, Liz... your last sentence stated my thoughts exactly... but for different (selfish, jealous *G*) reasons! LOL Whiskey: My welcome might not be quite as enthusiastic as some have been *G*... but it's sincere! Great poem! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Hearsay dont work with me, Ill figure you out for myself |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toe: An okay guy? *G* And I would have sworn you weren't given to understatements! LOL But if you expect ME to tell a beautiful woman just how gorgeous you are or how you're the finest, most wonderful man ever created... you're in for a long wait! ROFL! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Suthern, Thanks for the welcome and your kind reply [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
I think that all of you are right. This is one of the best she has done. The subject in this one is a very lucky person indeed. It is clear that he is well loved and I am very, very jealous. Whiskey I love you, and please remember that!!!! |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
The person who inspires you..... I give great thanks too.......another great poem here..................Bojopy |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply lovely Whiskey...this is my first taste of your work and I will be looking forward to reading more... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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