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tomorrow may bring unknown treasure
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tomorrow may bring unknown treasure |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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In and out of the corridors that < !signature-->link my thoughts and emotions smiling face belies the turmoil surfing waves of a swelling ocean Up with the thrill down with a deep breath hanging on in between chasing life and living death Warm sand beneath my toes sun caressing my skin eyes mirror lapping water sounds resembling a violin Such beauty resides within us it's how we look and feel life green eyes sparkle with pleasure tomorrow may bring - unknown treasure.. Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-03-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thanks RG, needed that...tomorrow may bring unknown treasure. : ) |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Lovely poem RainbowGirl. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, we just never know what lies around the next bend! This is beautiful, Cindy! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Every day brings a treasure......you, Cindy. Wonderful poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RainbowGirl, Tomorrow itself is the treasure. Beautiful poem. *L* Sy |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I agree with Sy tommorrow is a treasure in itself , wonderful poem  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rainbow, I like the way you see life This, incidently is a lovely poem Liz |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Again, you've managed to put life in perpective in your poem...lovely!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
We never know what tomorrow will bring, thanks for the reminder |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Heartwarming and beautiful as always Rainbow! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hawk New Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 3 |
great poem |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I think there is a unfound treasure at the end of your Rainbow Great Poem Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
RG, this is lovely, true we don't know what tomorrow brings, and I think the simplest things are a treasure What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Munda: There's treasure to be found everywhere.. HUGS Eloise: Thank you HUGS Denise: It isn't but thank you for trying to kid me..*g* HUGS Bal: I'm glad tomorrow never comes then..*g* HUSG Seymour: True, each is treasure, albeit sometimes burried.. HUGS whiskey: Thank you.. and I don't even drink it..ooops *g*HUGS Elizabeth: The only way to be seen, as life.. Did you get the reply mail BTW?HUGS PDV: You should see what else I put in perspective...ooops wrong forum..*g* HUGS Hoot: You of all people don't need reminding of that, you live with it.. HUGS devina: Thanks sweetherat.. HUGS Hawk: Thank you.. HUGS Knight: Well, that makes it all the more pleasurable, or does it?..*g* HUGS DA: I agree with you, it's the simple things.. HUSG < !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Tomorrow and Yesterday are the same word in some languages... just don't miss today's treasures pet.. Wonderful!  How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
this is really beautiful rainbow....hugs for your today's and hopes for your tomorrows |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We never know what tomorrow might bring But whatever the future, your soul will sing With the spirit of love that you so kindly share No matter what it is you have to bear. A rainbow of hope, painting the skies... A feast of beauty for our loving eyes... A caring heart that erases the miles To give big hugs and distribute smiles. May your green eyes always sparkle with pleasure For you, my dear friend, are always a treasure! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Queen I echo 'Deer - you are a treasure for all days. So loving and full of hope. Belle I love your poem to Cindy - that is one of the sweetest poems I've seen you write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LJA: Shhhhhhh... Geesh! You're gonna wreck my mean, nasty-tempered reputation calling my poems sweet! LOL |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I also will echo 'Deer.... This is beautiful Rainbow... I was also very touched by suthern's poem to you... Hugs |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
LR: I know sweetheart.. HUSG Iloveit:..HUSG back Suthern: You're supposed to be making me laugh, not cry..thank you, that is so nice...*gulp* HUSG Mother Hen LJA: You little darling, you say all the right things...*g* HUSG Pepper: You snuck in there, thank you sweetheart.. HUSG < !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Auntie, that's a wonderful tribute for a wonderful woman ... ... I don't have Buzz eloquence but I can say you're a rare friend ... ... May tommorow bring Rainbow and you happiness ! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is BEAUTIFUL!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I live and love the mystery of life, and each day is a gift - this was lovely! |
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