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Force Of Nature (Written with First_Knight in a game of poetry tag)
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Force Of Nature (Written with First_Knight in a game of poetry tag) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Force Of Nature Feelings shared without one word In touch are volumes said We dance together in this life Two birds with wings outspread Souls that circle ‘round one light Like moths drawn to a flame Heart’s desires pulls on us And nothing is the same Nature’s laws at full abreast Our blood is flowing wild Two as one for all to see The fear of love defiled Waves of passion keep us close We’re drifiting on the sea Storms may come and storms may go But you belong with me David...thanks for the help. It was a lot of fun writing this with you. "I am nothing special, of this I am sure. I am a common man with common thoughts and I've led a common life. There are no monuments dedicated to me and my name will soon be forgotten, but I've loved another with all my heart and soul, and to me , this has always been enough." ~Nicholas Sparks from The Notebook |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Ruth, Well Done both of you!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think you both have something worth hangin on to. Good poem too! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is COMPATIBILITY. And a great poem, too Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dark Angel...thanks, we had a lot of fun doing this one, perhaps we'll write more together devine...I'm not sure how to respond to that, so I'll just say thanks for now Liz...compatibility is a good thing, but there is a lot of other things that must factor in....thank you |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'll just say beautiful, to the both of you! Denise |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Too many cooks may spoil the pot its true, But when it comes to making love, It's obviously better with two! Nice job! How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very,very nice. Enjoyed it very much! |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Beautiful work. Well done both of you!! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
My dear Lady Ruth, Doing this was such an honor that when we started I could hardly begin. Your talent overshadows any I might bring to the table. Sharing with you in this was a gift from you that I will never be able to fully repay. But if I must be in debt, being in debt to you seems most a gift in all its own. Thank you all for response as I only held the candle.....Ruth is the light and that which makes any of this shine Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Denise, jaxjoy, Rebel and Septsong...thank you all very much David...you underestimate your own talents, yes, I know you had many reservations about doing a poem with me, but I'm glad you broke past those barriers and did. Thank you |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I really do not know what poetry tag is, but I do know that it worked here... Very beautiful work and I commend you both.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
You two did a great job with this one!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Pepper and Echo |
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