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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Plastured to a saffron loomed existence Wishing to arise one day thru its distance Atrociously awaiting as the searing never subsides Relented without and having solace insides Petering gradually as life diminishes Lost in sorrow and looking for Heroic finishes Murky in mind of the crimping demise & now divulging the arcane cries With no one near; to again fear It comes only in one; a tear < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
I haven't been on here long enough to know if people who write sad poetry are sad or not. I hope you're not! I'm not sure I understood it all, but it sounds as tho you are dying. are you? I hope not. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Bbuzz thank you for the response and i write sad poetry to be happy....and no I am not dying but yet I am and so is everybody.... I dont mean that in a depressive way either I just know I'm alive and will die!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful! Great ending! 'a tear' I love it! Denise |
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