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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
What days!we borrow from somthing yet unseen What ways!we denounce each breath so keen As untrivial as we are we still go further on Laughing from without but within so withdrawn In a moments occurence we will see one more light The darkest bright; the darkest bright of our life Whats to come in this alane of this therafter Crosses, crossbones, or of any significant matter Were we welcomed in life? will we be welcomed in death? There was somthing here before and there will be somthing here when we left The stories read & said lead us to this belief but does that truelly give our thoughts of any kind of relief |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Great poem well done  |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
When we accept life death has no power over us.Just a point of view from Jesus and me.I did enjoy the poem and understand,although it's been a while now. Sincerely, Paul |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I can't figure out how to edit a poem if you read this please help |
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Deborah Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 41 |
Nice poem bringing up a lot of good questions about life and death. I especially like the line "Laughing from without but within so withdrawn", how true it is for so many of us. Deborah |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Bojopy- to edit a post, just go to that little icon above the post with the pencil in it! Click on that and then you can edit! I like the thoughts in this poem! Denise |
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