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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Your voice " Yesterday I heard a sound Your outer voice I had found Listening to you I instantly knew You were the one of which I dreamed Your voice Id heard before it seemed Not untill that moment did I know How beautiful your words did flow Whispering words of love to me You knew how much I longed for thee The laughter of your soul shone through A loving heart so strong and true No better way to end the day Than to hear the words that you did say I love you , you confessed to me I love you too can't you see I feel the love of which you tell I feel it deep within myself So deep a sound Is contained The voice of you inside my brain. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Hey Whiskey how goes it down under? Don't you ever right a bad poem? What a lucky person you have, by the way you write they must know it. Read ya later, Paul |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Paul Downunder is hot And yes To me I write bad poems The person He knows it I just have so many feelings for him its easy to write about how much he moves my soul  Julie |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such a sweet verse of adoration. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Whiskey! Denise |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Voices like that do stay with us don't they? Very nice. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes a voice can touch our heart and soul |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Most definitely a voice can touch our soul...this has happened before to me. Lovely poem! Tamera |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
Well whiskey, you know that I know how you feel. I would put into words, but they would never sound as good as that! You say that you are a bad writer, I disagree. I can't think of any of the greats that could make music with words like you just did. All that I can say is that I love you more then you could possibley understand! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a beautiful poem Whiskey. I really enjoyed the read. It flowed so well. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Everyone Your encouragement means alot to me |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
So - you are from DU huh? I live next door - ie NZ! Don't you just feel sorry for the majority of our fellow netpoets in winter! Whiskey - this is a nice poem - great emotion. K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Severn, Yes I am from Australia, NZ is a great place, Yes I feel sorry and no I dont feel sorry for the others in winter I mean I hate it when its too hot , Thanks for your reply |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
What a sweet poem....You must have a heart the size of Austrailia! I'd love to hear you recite it with that sexy "Aussie" accent! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Toe - desist in your defiling...!!!  Well Whiskey - do you want to chuck some of that nice weather over here? Because our summer isn't much of one at present! (Oh - and ignore Toe...) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Toe Severn, Id give you all the hot weather if I could it drives me insane |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, whiskey... some voices mean so much that you'd welcome the chance to listen to them... even if they were reading labels from canned soup! LOL |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Whiskey Girl - that's right, ol' suthern (Belle) knows all about reading soup can labels - she has to read them for Toerag - it seems he doesn't trust the pictures on the labels. He can't figure out how the soup company could put a large bowl into a small can. He had to learn the hard way after he bought a case of Lima Bean soup thinking he was going to get a free soup bowl service for 24 - ha ha ha |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Wow - beautiful poem Whiskey! You're very lucky to feel the way you do. I am from AUstralia too! Where are you? |
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cokey_95 Junior Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 35 |
Your poems are so beautiful..I hope you know what a great talent you have. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Whiskey, Is Toe bothering you again? Now, as for your poem, it's very difficult to keep up with all your writing of late, but I try, and this is lovely. And yes, the sound of his voice can do wonders, unless he's a poet, then the sound of his pen can work the same magic Liz |
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