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Open Poetry #5

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mama duck
Junior Member

since 1999-12-31

Posts 41
Northern California

0 posted 2000-01-02 05:32 PM

Seperated

One gray Autumn noontime
you visit me,
in the shadows,
to say good-by again.

I can't hold you anymore
or help you on your way.

We're become parted friends
and parted we'll stay.

The rain returns
and with it tears
for love that's gone away.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-01-02 06:21 PM

Chris - this is tender, and sweet - very nice work.

...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-02 07:35 PM

Ahhhhh....this is so sad. Yet beautifully done!

Denise

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

3 posted 2000-01-04 02:58 AM

how very sad...you wrote this wuite beautifully!

~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

4 posted 2000-01-04 09:46 AM

So sad , But a wonderful poem

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-01-09 10:06 AM

Chris -

Glad I found this.
Says a lot in a few words.
Keep it up.
Welcome.
~Marge~

Lisa Graham-Marshall
Junior Member

since 1999-12-31

Posts 23
Nottingham. UK

6 posted 2000-01-09 10:24 AM

"Short but sweet..Lovely"

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