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So Far Away |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Grandma, why can't you be here- I need you so much now. I need someone to talk to- Someone who knows me inside out. I miss your loving smile, And your petite little hugs. I miss all your advice, It always meant so much. To know you're far away, Still kills me inside. I can hardly hear your voice, Without trying not cry. I know you're needed there, And because your hearts so big, You're sacrificing happiness- For those who are in need. Just remember I am here, To love you as you are, No judgement in my eyes, I love you most by far. Remember you have your own needs too, Take care and remember how much I miss you. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Very nice thoughts shared in this poem  Death of a loved one is something that brings things to light that sometime we missed beforeI have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having love will last forever. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful Devina! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Grandma's are soooo special - I'm fortunate to have one who's 96 now.... and I just recently lost the other at 93... I see that as a blessing.... |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
devina.. I have lost all my grandparents and both parents, but the sweetest thing is... they are not gone. They live in my heart. Beautiful poem. I feel your love in every word. B Gravitt |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Grandparents can be such loving people in our lives. I can see through this poem how much you miss your grandmother. JOY |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
There is perhaps nothing in life more pure than the love between grandparent and grandchild. She is proud, no doubt. How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So lovely and so touching! Wonderful, devina! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is so sweet. Must be a sweet grand daughter. Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
devina, very nice enjoyed the poem. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
All of your comments mean so much...I want to thank you all, but also let you know the real meaning of the poem. This poem may have given the wrong impression to some, but my grandmother moved to Indiana to take care of her parents who are sick. I still live in California and miss her very deeply. Your thoughts are all so touching, and thank you again!!! |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
This is pure love. Paul |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Thank you for your sweet honesty Paul! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A nice tribute to an important figure in your life |
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