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This Must Be Love
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This Must Be Love |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Love lit on my shoulder like a butterfly one day, As I was watching you walk on clouds one Spring day. I felt it's wings a flutter Brushing against my cheek When a soft faint voice whispered "This must be love I think!" |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very nice. Simple, to the point, and lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very sweet  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
how sweet ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It sure sounds like love to me! This is so beautiful, Septsong! As pretty as a butterfly it is! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like the way you formatted this..and the lightness of the poem made it seem like a fluttering butterfly! Good job!  |
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broker6 Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 132Bellevue, NE, Sarpy |
Of course. How else could it happen?  ) |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Thank you all for your comments, glad you enjoyed this. It just came to me the other evening, and this is exactly how it happened some 30 years ago, somethings I guess you never forget. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is so beautiful..light and delicate, just like the first glimpse of love is. Wonderful! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Without a doubt, it's love and so gently and tenderly captured. Thanks. |
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