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Open Poetry #5

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highwayman
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa

0 posted 2000-01-01 10:35 PM

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How do I open,
this heart of mine,
When it's been closed,
For all this time.
It got locked up,
A few years ago,
By this girl, when,
She decided to go.
She left with my love,
And went away,
To never come back,
Leaveing me here to stay.
I don't know how,
To handle my life,
For without my love,
There's only strife.

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2000-01-01 10:41 PM

WOnderful poem , I like this one too

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

2 posted 2000-01-02 01:08 AM

Very nice read

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-02 04:21 PM

Losing someone you love is hard. You have expressed it well!

Denise

mama duck
Junior Member

since 1999-12-31

Posts 41
Northern California

4 posted 2000-01-02 06:40 PM

What torture it is to be rejected. The incredible depths of dispair we bear. And yet to live and have never loved would be worse--a lifelong diet of oatmeal and saltine crackers? Choices, choices. Thanks for the poem. Chris

highwayman
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa

5 posted 2000-01-05 02:57 AM

Thanks to all who have left such heart felt encouragement. It is much needed. I love each and every one of you. And Whiskey, well you know waz up.

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