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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Hate " Born to suffer Mad to undress the pain of the heart Instruct never to kill On the verge of happiness and success Death comes, confusion no connections Of her boyfriend teenaged stoned Will you die for me? Lets see Feed me, in this way to the end Haven't you seen my friend Too much, no more, no more Put to rest, peaceful |
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maedavid Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 24Carrollton, TX, USA |
Very deep poem. Only time can heal the heart, but one thing I've learned in life is that it always is darker just before the dawn. Don't hang on to the bad things in life. Let them go. It will only turn you bitter. Try to find something good to dwell on instead. You are a very pretty girl and I'm sure God loves you. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thankyou, this poem was written some time ago and I now have love and happiness, Ive learnt that the bad things that have happend to me arent my fault, and that man is no longer able to hold my mind. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm happy for you, Whiskey! Great poem! Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I'm glad you feel no longer that you were "born to suffer" - that line grabbed me right off. Somehow, I believe the darkness we go through sometimes is for a reason. I know I wouldn't appreciate the love offered me today if it weren't for some of the grief in my past. The past is best,laid to rest - but doesn't necessarily need to be forgotten. Michael |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'm glad this sad part of your life is over, and may happiness find you in the new year!(From the looks of things, it already has- am I right?  )Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This poem disturbed me until I read of your better times. I'm glad! In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
THis left me feeling dark and lonely. I see the feelings deep inside that led to this writing. I am so glad that what led to this writing is of the past and that new lights shines on you. Thank you for sharing I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm glad you have gotten past the hate to love once more |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you all for you kind words, And Yes Ive found love and I am so happy its just wonderful |
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