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My Path
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My Path |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Stepping stones along my path Each obscured from view. Singly coming into sight As I pass quickly through. Blinking thoughts reveal the course, One step at a time. Winnow, slither, collide, return. I stay on the line. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I liked your first entry! The font and color makes it hard to read, but it was worth it.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions! Wonderful poem! One step, one day at a time! Much wisdom in this little one! Denise |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Poet de Vine and dsnyder, Thank you both for taking the time to read My Path. I'll be more careful with color and font in the future. As time goes on I'll post more poems, maybe longer ones. Right now I'm really having too much fun reading other peoples work and the responses. Chris |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome. I like your writing and message. How true it is, and what a blessing, too, that we only see a little of what lies before us. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Well Mama Duck,very nice, Welcome. look forward to more,and isn't that how life flows. Paul |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Welcome to Passions Chris. Enjoyed your poem. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Great poem , life is surley like that , Welcome  Look forward to reading more work |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Welcome to passions, happy new year, enjoyed the poem...hope to read more soon! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a nice welcome poem to passions, welcome back |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Thank you all so much for reading and responding. I think I'm going to like being a part of Passions very much. A beautiful New Year to you all. Chris |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Nice work. Hope to see many more!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I really must have some kind of nutty sense of humour cause each time I see your name I want to go 'quack' but in a friendly way...LOL..It's not often a name makes me giggle..*g*..You have to tell me why...Please???.. Great thoughts and not an easy path either.. HUGS< !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-01-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You paint a pretty nice metaphorical picture here, MD.... Welcome to the fold....   |
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Geo Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 73Nebraska |
Wonderful poem, makes me think! I am looking forward to reading more of your writing! Im new here and am enjoying reading all the poetry!!! |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Thanks again for the input. In reply to RainbowGirl's giggles, I think baby ducks are one of the most adorable creatures on the planet. I have a tendency to call my husband this as a pet name. Several of the people who work for me starting referring to me as mama duck. One even made a lovely duck sign for my office door. It's silly, but it works as a nickname. Far better than some names I'm called out of earshot, I'm sure. Chris |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! I liked this very much! Thank God they only come into view when we need them too. For if we knew the road that was ahead I wonder if we could walk the path. <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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