Open Poetry #5 |
Angel |
Elizabeth
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A spirit, a beacon To shine throught the night To guide you to safety Through many a plight; And sounding through your darkness Clear as a bell The voice of the person Who is your angel. A rose, 'midst the weeds Of grief and of pain Reminding you that someday Things will be alright again, And like hot chocolate On a chill winter day They warm up your soul And spirit all the way, Someone chosen just for you Above all the rest For this is the one Who can do the job best To pierce throught your darkness And spread warmth and light A reminder of beauty Setting sorrow to flight You have been chosen And so have been they To be each other's angels And guide through life's way. Roses thorns/Rosebud Feb. 9th, 1999 |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Heavenly thoughts! Very lovely! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I loved your poem, if only the angels would tell cupid when he's needed!!! |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
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Thank you, Denise and Devina! And Devina-if only we could! Wouldn't it be nice... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roses, You have some wonderful lines in this poem Enjoyed the read. |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
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Thanks much, Seymour. Glad you like it. Roses thorns |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This has lots of beautiful lines in it...I enjoyed |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely Rt...... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I love it,I enjoyed it greatly ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very very nice - and beautiful thoughts. |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Rose thorns, I like the poem. I agree with devina, maybe cupid is resting. Enjoyed the read. B Gravitt |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hoot, Pepper, Echo, Severn, Betty~thank you all very much! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very well crafted verse! I love this! My kinda thing it is! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Elizabeth
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Thank you, WhtDove, for reading it. I am glad you liked it. Rt |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roses Thorns - Angels are with us all the time. This is a lovely reminder. Very nice ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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