Open Poetry #5 |
Sensitivity |
Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
People say I'm too sensitive That I take too many things to heart That they don't need my compassion And would be better off without me Trying to give them a shoulder to cry on People say I care too much That I have nothing but pity That I wear a mask of concern And I should just be a little more human Instead of being so humane The rock being pushed on me Was beginning to wear me down And finally I was beginning to break As my heart pulled away to freeze But then I met you You said that you really cared You said that nothing more could be more beautiful In my heart than my sensivity and my love You said that I was your only one You said that nothing more you could ever want Was everything in me People say I think too much That I shouldn't be able to see into their hearts That I shouldn't be able hear the whispers of minds And would be still just as happy as they say they are Without the little friendly smile I send their way People say I know more than I should That I shouldn't be so enchanting That I shouldn't be so friendly And know what they want so soon Then try to grant their wish like a star I never knew But now I'm alone With only the sensitivity and love you said you cherished You seem to still love me, I can feel, hear and see it And I've heard you whisper my name more than as a friend But I knew that if I truly loved you, I would listen to what my heart says And keep faith that if I set you free despite the pain My hunter's falcon would come back again People say that sensitivy is a waste That I shouldn't use the little time on the emotion That I would only get hurt And that I should just give up that one little feeling For the cold politeness that we all show Sensitivity is useless If can only hurt you One day you will grow cold Because of your foolish compassion For people who would never care About the things you care about I shrug it off as best I can Crying when I can't forget their disapproval I wish that this emotion was what they say it is But deep inside my spirit, my heart, and my mind I know that everything would fall apart Without just a little Yes, even from me, Sensivity "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Another Beautiful Poem , I too am a sensetive |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Don't you EVER change, This is Wonderful. If your Spirit is in check the rest,let it flow. Really enjoyed. Thanks for your support. Paul |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful. You should not let others disaproval of you get you down, (though I shouldn't be talking cause i do the same thing). Be who you are, and that is all you ever need to be no matter what anyone says. Every now and then sensitive people get hurt, but who do the insensitive people turn to when they get hurt?? US, the sensitive ones, the ones to calm their hurts. I loved your poem, very emotional! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem! And I agree, don't ever change! There is too much insensitivity in this world already and not enough of the sensitive ones! Denise |
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