Open Poetry #5 |
To you |
littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
To You Entangled in a love made before birth Knowledge of a feeling, too strong to explain A deep thought of a dream coming true A special moment ready to be lived A look of fulfillment in a second glance A connection of two hearts now one A completion, the missing half now found The sensation as a touch is shared The warmth of a kiss given and taken The words I love you meant from the soul As to you I give myself |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Beautiful and touching... Tamera |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
You coul almost call this Soul Mate, it reminds me of my wife and I. Thanks, Paul |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful, you captured it quit nicely! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
'Entangled in a love made before birth' Wonderful poem! I believe that we find the one we are destined to be with...despite detours, I believe we eventually find them! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is very sweet...nice sentiments |
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