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John Yaws
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2000-02-08 06:23 PM


Today the Doctor told me-
“I fear you’re going blind”.
A lot of mixed emotions
Went rushing through my mind.

I thought that I’d just close my eyes-
And see what I could see...
Forgotten sights from long ago-
Came drifting back to me.

I saw my dear, old Grandad-
With cheerful laughing eyes...
Who always had some time for me,
Or brought me some surprise.

I thought of days of childhood-
The laughter and the play...
My brother lived and laughed with me
As though ‘twere yesterday.

I saw those Rocky Mountains-
Who’s peaks caress the sky..
And walked again the lonely wastes
And heard the wild goose cry.

I rode those Arizona plains-
The sun ablaze above...
And watched the restless tumble weeds
A lifestyle that I love.

Long forgotten smiling eyes-
And tender, soothing touch
I wonder how on earth a man
Could e’er forget so much?

So if another sunrise-
My eyes should never see-
I can’t complain at all, my friend
My memory’s still with me.


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Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-02-08 07:13 PM


Gunslinger, hope this is not a peom about you.  If it is, I wish you well.
I quickly have become an admirer of your poetry.  Please keep writing!
Danny

jascanvey
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
2 posted 2000-02-08 08:01 PM


This is just so sad, please tell me it's not true. I couldn't bear the pain of not being able to see all the wonders in life. This is just so distressing and brings to mind all of my own sweet memories, for which I thankyou.
devina
Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
3 posted 2000-02-08 08:22 PM


GS- you're such a strong man...you know you can get through this...just concentrate on those that love you, especially all your friends here at passions!!!! Hers's a hug to make you smile!!!    ~HUG~< !signature-->

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (edited 02-08-2000).]

~ViXeN~
Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada
4 posted 2000-02-13 01:22 AM


awww this is so sad, but so well done. such emotion, whew!
i sure hope this isnt about you..

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