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catwomen
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since 2000-02-05
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0 posted 2000-02-06 12:26 PM


Bricks


Deep within my soul, lies secrets I have never told
Years of pain and suffering
Have built a wall, so thick and high
Lots of patience is needed to tear it down
If you have the patience brick by brick the wall will come down.
Don’t betray my trust
More bricks will go up
Be honest and loving
More bricks will come down
Once enough bricks are down you will discover
The true me, my soul.



 

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-06 04:35 PM


That's the only way it works, brick by brick!
Wonderful poem!

Denise

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