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don't fall |
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jenn991013 New Member
since 1999-12-30
Posts 5 |
how should i say this? there is only one way i was right maybe i didn't want to see you the way that you are mabye i knew all along but i just didn't want it to be true mabye that's why i didn't let go and didn't get hurt or maybe just maybe i was only lucky i didn't fall to hard in love |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, if you didn't fall enough to get hurt, I certainly don't think it was love you fell into...just my view, like the poem anyway, though. michael |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very nice. I liked it. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Love is a powerful thing , I agree if you didnt get hurt was it really love, Good poem  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, the falling can sometimes be the best part...just make sure you have someplace soft to land |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I must agree with Michael, Whiskey and Hoot! Good poem though! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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