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The Conductor (Me first attempt at free verse that i enjoyed writing. be nice or else) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Shaking one arm off to the east Shaking one arm off to the west The conductor of sounds begins Never ending remarks of beauty Not noted by the gentle beings will To please or to cause harmful tones There is beauty in all the world The conductor of sounds bears it all Reacting to the beauty is man's fate Who sifted the great beyondness Not the gentle being the harmless The one who is blamed wreaks havoc Through the players in the symphony All well mastered in their trade Guided by his wand [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-05-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent! I like this Walt.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well Done! Especially liked " reacting to the beauty is man's fate..." How very apropro! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
BRAVO |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt, take a bow, this is really good! -SEA |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks you guys for the confidence and special thanx to poet devine for sayin yuh post it its good  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Walt you've done a great job! Be nice or what eh? haha...j/k Well done for your first shot at it. <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
uhhhhh.....would it be ok to say I like it a lot ? In fact I love it !  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Me thinks free verse likes you well m'friend!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There is beauty in all the world, we just have to have the eyes to see it and the ears to hear it! Beautiful symphony, Walt! Denise |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
WOW to "WOW"...Great job!!! |
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