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Perfect true love |
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Jone Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 41 |
The chaos in my mind, Like a tornado in the ocean, It makes me, makes me go blind. I cannot see the future, The past, The present, I cannot see the world, For the world cannot see me. Hurt, pain, misery, happiness. Love. Love is hurt. Love is pain. Love is misery. Is love happiness? My world has turned, I have never found love, Maybe love has burned. Love is death, Death brings out love. It takes away my breath; To think that love is life, To think there is a perfect love, To think that one can find true love, It takes away my breath, It scares me half to death. Maybe it's time, Time will tell. Maybe one day all will be known, Maybe one day every will be shown. Today we do not know, But maybe we will tomorrow, Yes, tomorrow we will know, There is no true love in this world, For any one of us to show. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
"I cannot see the world, For the world cannot see me." Slam! Nailed that one on the head! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
welcome Jone ... I have felt your pain and I agree that love is all the things that you have described and more it's the 'and more' part that won't surface and show its' face for quite some time possibly not til a new love blossoms Have faith Rex [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 02-05-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jone- Hmmmm ! Nice entrance you've made to Passion's. Welcome. Love can be found true or not ... in the love you're in, in the love you've got. True love comes when your guard is down. Treat it kindly ... it'll stick around. Love it for the time you're in it ... for it can flee in just a minute. If it goes as it often does another will come just becuz ..... that's just the way it is with love.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome the forum, Jone. I look forward to reading more. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Welcome, welcome, welcome! Nice poem! Lovely way to make an entrance. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Check your email for a special welcome....  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Jone, Welcome to Passions, and with this heartfelt poem. All you describe is real until you find a true love Liz |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! Looking for love in all the wrong places...there is true love out there! God for one will never let you down. <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Jone Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 41 |
Thank you all for your time in reading my poem.... in reading all of the poems throughout this forum, however, i have noticed that they are mostly sad and unhappy poems about pain and misery.... should true love cause pain and misery? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jone, yes love does cause pain and misery, should it? No, of course not. I think- good with the bad- day with night and so on. Your poem was really heartfelt.Welcome! I will definately be looking for more from you! -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well Jone it looks like love has really disappointed you or have you disappointed love. I have lots of hope for the beauty of love and yes at times it can be painful....James |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
A very beautiful and sad poem, you hit all the emotions right on! |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
Your poem is beautiful. and yes love does bring pain and misery, yet at the same time it can bring great joy and happiness. Love finds you when you least expect it I know |
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