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candy hearts and broken teeth |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I'm not feeling myself tonight. Or this whole week, for that matter. Mike -candy hearts and broken teeth- fragment candy hearts. dress all torn, astray. pictures burned, regret. happy valentine's day. wax on fingertips. "there's no judge in judgment, except scrambled." candle lit, put out. "no mercy in merci," she rambled. smoke smears on the pane. chocolate foil trash. tooth chips, broken plate. mascara pain -- eye lash. dusty sugarpill hearts. phone snapped from the wall. KISS ME; LOVE YA; I DO, one side. other, nothing at all. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative and very sad, Mike. And well done. Denise |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you. Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike- Well, for a guy that's not feeling quite 'up to snuff' ... you sure do write some terrific stuff !  ~*Marge*~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
O dear, O dear, my dear... you made me re-live the fear... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow, this is sad!  <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Marge, thanks for that cute couplet. (double couplet?) serenity, I wish you no heart attacks! WhtDove, It's sad, yes; but sort of a detached, distanced sad. Which probably makes it even sadder... Mike |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bsquirrel, This is the other side of what I've been through. Either way, very sad and so hard to go through. -SEA |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
distance...detached...yep, that is the way you feel after a holiday like that, the distance makes it easier to deal with...you did a really good job with this.....really good |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
:p Sorry about this one! She said burn ... together. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, this is good too...be whoever you want to be |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
If there were only a way to erase this. |
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