Open Poetry #5 |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Open your eyes and you may not see clearly Open your ears and you may not hear clearly Open your heart and you will see blindly Open your mind and you will see only what you want to see but open your soul and it will lead you where you want to go. |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Stunning! I really enjoyed reading this. How well it speaks the truth! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I enjoyed this, too. Some of it's almost bitter, though really hard-won experience. Whatever difference that makes. Mike |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Glad to read your poems again, whiskey. Again, another lovely poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This one say so much with few words! Very good, Whiskey! Denise |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Perfect Zen whiskey!!!! Beautiful! |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
SIMPLY SAID! nice whiskers |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Whiskey, this is really very good, I agree with you! Enjoyed this read! -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW! I liked this, my kind of thing! So very true it is! Are you aware we have a spiritual forum also? <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Short sweet and to the point. I like this a lot! I am going to miss your poetry while I am gone! Take care of yourself ok!?! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* [This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 02-04-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I feel like you wrote it just for me. I SO needed to read this tonight. Thank you, O Wise One. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful little poem with much wisdom Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You nailed this one right on the head, my friend! Corinne |
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