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Open Poetry #5

Sucking it in...

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-03 11:05 PM

suck in the hate
suck in the pain
suck everything that you crave
suck up your superficial underlying fear
suck up that feeling
suck up that reason
suck it up entirely
till it gives you some reason for living..

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-02-04 12:22 PM

Hm...ok..well...not sure I know what you were aiming for here...

Astraea
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since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 2000-02-04 12:37 PM

I could be wrong, but I think it was trying to say that when you reach something that you just can't repress anymore, then that's your reason for living? That something that you just can't "suck in"? But nevertheless, it makes me think what you really meant. Nice.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

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