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agony Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 18 |
We are all born to start dying the minute we enter this crazy world.For something once so beautiful,that we humans have yet to discover,no pain,no suffering, no sickness,or plagues,we are all dying at someone elses decision. Our lives have been chosen and the paths we take were there before we had a choice to decide which path was right.So evil plagued our paradise,and now we have to choose our path,while the EVIL romes the earth. Tracy Schlieper |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
What a first poem... Welcome to Passions! But that was a lovely poem nonetheless. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
A cynical way of looking at the fact of life....philosophically..good attempt!  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very Good , Welcome  |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I understand what your saying and have felt this way before, forunately I've found life much more beautiful to concentrate on. I did sincerely enjoy it Paul |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Welcome to passions, and your poem is quite pulchritudinous!!! What a way to enter!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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