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Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
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Ohio

0 posted 2000-02-03 06:13 PM


* I finally got my lap top

You make me feel miserable
You make me feel sad
And when I am suffering
I just know you are glad.
You`ve pushed away my friends
With the things you make me do
And the only thing I`m left with
Is the false comfort of you.
You make me feel guilty
You insist I`m too fat.
You force me to exercise
No matter how long I`ve sat.
I try to just listen
And do what you say
But will you ever leave?
I wait for the day.



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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-02-03 06:20 PM


Blondie, I'm so sorry for you. I hope you feel better. I can't even imagine what you are going through. -SEA
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
2 posted 2000-02-03 06:30 PM


This is "just" a poem right?? I mean this can't happen in "real" life. right??

all too often it does.....


Robert

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-02-03 06:40 PM


Nice poem Blondie.  I see your eyes are wide open.  James
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-02-03 07:15 PM


I hope you feel better soon...keep the poetry flowing...keep your mind open... let your friends help you through this.  

Denise
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5 posted 2000-02-03 08:14 PM


My prayers are with you Blondie. I wish you the best.

Denise

Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
6 posted 2000-02-04 12:13 PM


She's there surviving it all
For you see, she has a good heart
One of the best, I'd say
And with a spirit keeping her heart wishing
Nothing will keep her down
We all wish you the best
Me, as well.
For we all go through hard times together
And we will always support the rest.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



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