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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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We together In stasis – our world Thoughts intermittent sent Heard by you I hear Nascent Yearning – a love to be born Our love Ubiquitous, so great as to witness Raven’s tears in fear of such joy Amassed from naught but Relishing the gifted Melody of your Smile I caught within A Maelstrom of brilliant hues From midnight pools of deep blue -shades of green- Imbued with spirit’s light, shining stars N’er thought to break free Assuage this fire Lit by your gaze Loved as I by You Fancy me, Love – the Reality of you Eternally Entrapped in the freedom – of you May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Let me be the first to say how INCREDIBLE this poem is!!! It's INCREDIBLE!!! Loved: Relishing the gifted Melody of your Smile" I loved it all, but that, is what poetry is about! [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 02-03-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WOW ! What an awesome acrostic. What an awesome poem. WHAT AN AWESOME, AWESOME PAIR ! The subtly of this is truly amazing. I think this may be one of the best of yours I've seen to date. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WONDERFUL!!!! This is absolutely one of your best poems I've yet to see. I love it  "Within your arms I am finally free" great line for an acrostic |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
'Entrapped in the freedom - of you' That just about sums up the perfect love relationship! Well done and beautiful! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Acrostically speaking this is great writing.. even without the acrostics, it's a wonderfully written poem. I congratulate you! I am looking forward to having you as a Mentor in the Teen Mentor Program! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
In Your Arms I Am Finally Free... Nothing better than that Satiate! Excellent form and writing Jenny Lee [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 02-04-2000).] |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Chris - wow...geeze, guy.  Thanks so much!Marge & Ruth - Thank you both, very much! Such great compliments coming from two poets I greatly admire leaves me blushing and quite honored! Denise - Thank you! PdV - Thank you too!! I very much look forward to being involved in the Mentor program!  Jenny Lee - You're such a sweetie, thanks so much! May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Satiate, this is icredible good. Love it..."within your arms I am finally free"...great line ! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful poem, much enjoyed. |
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