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As This Night Fell |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Such bright in the dimmness < !signature-->Amongst the brown and green Running blue flows wild nearby Friendly shadows in a trance All is warm and free In such delicate harmony Perfection in a dream Soft carresses, an easy touch Sparks a flame of desire One swaying in the wind Closeness as one with all Life in full circle, delicate Songs of flesh echoeing In the moment of time All worlds combine together Catching all in hypnotic dance Joy, love, and peace unite A picture of truth All in a mystery Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 02-11-2000).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
And a hypnotic poem!!! Beautiful! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like this  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful! I was carried along effortless from the first word through to the last! Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
A poem that makes you feel good from start to finish! Nice work, justbleu! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Such bright in the dimmness Amongst the brown and green Running blue flows wild nearby" So fresh, your words and style. I liked this very much! Claire |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Christopher....hypnotic poem...hmm!! Thank You!! Glad you liked it Hoot!! Thanks!! Denise that's cool that you seemed to flow through it so...Thank You!! Thanks Sally...it was meant to make one feel good!! Wow...a freshness to it...kinda pure huh?? Thank You Meadowmuse!! |
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