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Open Poetry #5

Caress By Night

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-02 05:51 PM

The blackness closing in
And I can feel
The sweetest sense of sorrow
And I know it’s real
As I lay here with you
Like serpents entwined
The light fades from us
And leaves the world behind
It never seems to be healed,
This wound inside of me
Even the sanctuary of night
Keeps taunting me
I used to be of the type;
Patient, and open to this
Now time is running out
With my lover,
In the cool darkness

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-03 12:13 PM

This has a sad quality, lovely but sad

Denise

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2000-02-03 11:32 AM

I don't always understand others writing
This to me sounds like you have fallen
out of love and so merely enduring the
moment
Maybe I shouldn't try to always understand

Rex
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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

3 posted 2000-02-03 11:41 AM

All we have is the moment...the now. Why not make the best of it?

Rosalind Palafox

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Posts 88

4 posted 2000-02-03 12:33 PM

i agree jml, but there are people who are soo blind and can't see the best thing if if were in front of them, therefore they cannot make the now the best possible....

"Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."

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