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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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If I must weep let me cry in the tongue of angels so that bitterness be made beauty-- agony to harmony, within-- a choir of seraphim... so that any who will hear have ears only for the jubilee of "holy, holy, holy..." May it echo in resounding hum quivering first in sweet refrain building note upon exquisite note-- sustain-- and burst in exaltation. A psalm to sing, to touch, to heal... Let us dance in glory as it is meant to be. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very touching entrance here!!!! Loved the line, let me cry in the tongue of angels...deep!!! Welcome!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Welcome serenity I'd join your choir but for two things ... I sound like a cracked bell and I'm afraid of heights An excellent first post  Rex }<{{{{o> |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You are a welcome addition to Passions.. I truly enjoyed reading this poem, and look forward to many more in kind... Nice work, serenity...  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful psalm, Serenity! Very lovely! Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all...I have found a home, and I blush to think that I am keeping company with so many talented writers. Thank you again for making me feel so welcome. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
If I must weep let me cry in the tongue of angels... I loved that line Beautiful piece...welcome from myself also!! Jennifer |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow! And WELCOME! This was very moving...we have a spiritual forum too, and we'd love to have you share some of your work with us there! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very well done. Glad to see you took my advise and post here. Welcome to Passion Serenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely written...welcome to passions |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
WELCOME! As a Spirit filled man I relate to this completly and really enjoyed it. look forward to the next one. Paul |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very spiritual poem! Nathan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
First post fever!!! I'm seeking first posts!  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Well I had to find Serenity's first post! lol!!! Great write, you started as a great writer -Am I impressed?.. maybe, Oh what the heck  I am darn impressed! Enjoyed the write and a belated-welcome to passions, we will meet on pip in eight years lol..... Just for the FYI! ARCTIC WIND |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
first post! up she goes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm glad that late took the time to brush off the pixie dust and bring this back to the fore... it's timeless.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wrote this one in High School--but I've been re-writing it ever since. I'm pretty sure I've only written six or seven poems--the rest were all just the same, edited, tweaked ad nauseum. But thanks for grazing here. I've been trying to remember who that girl was so long ago.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
just a subtle bump.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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