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~Ending to all pain~
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~Ending to all pain~ |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
The tears flow down my face They run continuously Competing in a race One that just cannot be won The pain strikes me Like a knife in the back This just cannot be I cannot believe the fact I cant pinpoint the feeling I feel I cannot win I cannot go on beleiving That happiness will begin My heart is torn My soul is shattered My body feels outworn From when it all mattered The pain has now gone It has been removed A light has been shone And the existence of true love to me To I have been proved He wiped away the tears Brought a smile to my face Erased all of my fears, Never could he be replaced. The strength of our love Is unpredictable Just to see a smile on his face Is a feeling that is indescribable The laughter, the tears, And the smiles Has the strength To stretch itself across the miles. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
ViXeN ... I keep thinking Reindeer ... I really like this name you've chose and you poem is so true It happened to me the same way Once I met my true love ... I could no longer bring even a vague picture of my first love to mind ~^~^~^~ Rex }<{{{{o> |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There's nothing in this world that compares to true love!  Denise |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
thanks! rex - i wasnt exactly thinking of reindeer when i chose the name lol, and yes no longer can i picture my first love now that i have found my true love...... and yes dsnyder, i agree, nothing in this world can compare to true love! its wonderful! |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vixen, Me on the other hand, remember all that I have loved before, that is why each and every single day I thank God for my husband- my only true love.-SEA ( Great poem!) |
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Jone Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 41 |
Vixen (Sher) Maybe the answer to the poem, to the replies, and to all the poems is simple. Maybe there is no true love. People become too transvixed on finding the one perfect love that may not even really exist... what if true love is only the love one has for themselves... and they only feel that love once they love themselves, and maybe for them it takes another person to realize their love for themself and to not hate so much anymore.... you should NEVER forget your first love because it is that love in which you use to base all your other loves... but remember there is NO perfect love |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Love can bridge all distances |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
jone - *johnathan* hehe i have to say i disagree, and i think and truely believe that there is such thing as perfect love, and i dont think i could ever forget my "first love" if i tried. i think one days your view on perfect love will change and you will believe in it too =) i know i do! and hoot - yes love can bridge all distances, i found that out =) !!!!! |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Jone...No perfect love you say....come now...you just haven't looked hard enough....because if that were true then this feeling in my heart would be a lie...I've known a few women i loved...and none have made my heart skip when i glance at them or catch a glint of sun in there eyes like my wife....truly my heart is ever warm from the most perfect love...which is "true love"...that i feel.. sorry, vixen to reply to someone elses reply..hehe..that's a mouth full.... Vixen...this was lovely...When one finds true love..a comparison is not needed...For the heart knows... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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