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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-01 05:50 PM

If she should ever wake
From the darkest of dark sleep
I pray the Lord my soul I’ll keep
If she should ever wake

I wait forever at her side
With no more tears to brush aside
And only the wind howling outside
Will be the only sound God makes
If she should ever wake

I promised I would never leave
A promise I will never break
If she should ever wake

I told her I’m the first one she’ll see
And here I’ll always be
So she would come back to me
Oh what a smile my face would make
If she should ever wake

So I lay myself beside her
And write these songs for her
Hoping she could possibly hear
Wishing with wistful tears

I promised I would never leave
A promise I will never break
If she should ever wake

I hold her cold, unfeeling hand
Trying to understand
How to reap a harvest from a barren land
And love for loving’s sake
If she should ever wake

Never has time moved so slow
Nor darkness seemed to grow
Into her dream I will follow
And pray my soul to take
If she should never wake

Zelda
Junior Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 43
NOVA

1 posted 2000-02-01 05:54 PM

My eyes are wet after reading this... I know of undying love, and you have expressed it beautifully.

Exquisite, JML
Z

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 2000-02-01 06:20 PM

WoW!
Amazed I am!
The raw feeling of this shot out at me, grabbing hold and refusing to yield its grip! Great hardly covers it, but that's the best I can come up with right now!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-02-01 07:56 PM

I agree! This is magnificent, JML!! Simply magnficent!

Denise

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2000-02-01 08:00 PM

JML,
Good words, good feeling, good poem.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-02-01 10:07 PM

This is so hauntingly sad, but very well written

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-02-01 10:33 PM

JML-

Beautifully done.
My heart says I like it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

7 posted 2000-02-02 01:29 AM

JML,
I don't know what to say, except I hope things work out for you. This was incredibly beautiful!!!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

8 posted 2000-02-02 01:34 AM

This was absolutely beautiful...what a lucky woman she!! I loved this!!

Take Care
Bridgette

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2000-02-02 03:03 AM

I have been humbled...

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2000-02-02 07:14 AM

What an amazing poem, and heart wrenching
Liz

tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

11 posted 2000-02-02 09:03 AM

Truly, having been in a coma myself these words touched to the soul of me !

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

12 posted 2000-02-02 09:14 AM

Everyone: Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me on this one and for letting me know how it made you feel. I am forever grateful, but to allay everyone's concerns, this was a work of fiction(thank god).

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