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I'll think of you forever
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I'll think of you forever |
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Arabian Knight Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 16Saudi Arabia |
You are a friend I love indeed you're never far at time of need you heal my wounds that always bleed I'll think of you forever Before we met my eyes were blind you gave me sight..the perfect kind your face is always in my mind I'll think of you forever You satisfied my urging soul you gave my life a noble goal your service is my only role I'll think of you forever Your smile has caused my sun to show and through your laugh my winds will blow your caring words make roses grow I'll think of you forever Without your eyes there is no life your absence is a poisoned knife to see you is my highest strife I'll think of you forever For you I open all my doors and fight for you a thousand wars the heart inside my chest is yours I'll think of you forever Your memory revives my heart your image is my only art and even if we go apart I'll think of you forever [This message has been edited by Arabian Knight (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Arabian Knight, you've written a beautiful piece here. The rhythm is flowing and unfeigned, the message, sincere. Very well done! Claire |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Oh, oh *sigh*. This is a wonderful first piece. Welcome to Passions. Now if only this girl could find a Knight who would write like this for her...lol |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
This is really excellent! The words roll off my tongue with such ease. Welcome, Arabian--great entrance. ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, AK! This sure sounds like love to me! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
AK, this is wonderful! Welcome!!  -SEA |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Forever and a day... your poem is sure to capture many hearts. Beautiful... Z |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*sigh* what a first posting. Wonderful poem and welcome to passions  |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Arabian Knight, How lucky she is to have someone feel the way you do...Just a question, is she in your life now? Alot of the verses are in past tense as well as the line "Your memory revives my heart". She's very lucky. This was beautifully written. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was a beautiful piece it definately touched my heart!! A friend is one of most wonderful people in the world!! I loved this!! A very nice piece for a first post!! Welcome to Passions!! Take Care Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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