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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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You're everywhere You're all of my world, everything that I can see You fill my world with happiness and you've come and set me free You're the moon that I see shining brightly upon your face You're the stars that dance lightly as we softly embrace You're the gentle night air breeze, gently brushing upon my knee's You're the sweet smells in the air, flowing through my hair And you're all around me and I thankyou for being there [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Whomever this is, is truly the center of your universe. This is just so sweet. Very well done. Keep up the good work. Jfreak |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sweet and lovely, I agree! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Simply dreamy~ Very nice! Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Like the sentiments, but could I suggest a minor grammatical change... "Your" should be "You're" As in YOU ARE...  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Many thanks to jfreak, Denise mariee and a special thanks to Christopher for spotting my error Ta....  Chris I'll edit it straight away..  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie, this was very, very sweet! -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sea..thanks for your sweet reply and thanks for reading...Tracie  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sounds like love to me Tracie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Hoot Yes my loving husband who saved me from my past torture and has held my hand all the way since....14 years in fact. Thanks for reading |
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