Open Poetry #5 |
Love beyond Perception |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Love beyond Perception ~~~~~~~~~ Two soul mates part "nothing lasts forever" I doubt we'll ever meet again "I love you there will be no other" this parting fills my heart with pain You heart is drifting so I release you a cheerful past can I forget Though I may wander life in sorrow my prayers are that your happy yet Perhaps in time on a lonely evening your thoughts will reminisce of me And wonder if I'm even living that night I'll think the same of thee Through this lonesome life I wander alone with thoughts of only you Your memory blinds my sight forever with love far greater than you knew When slowly all your friends depart you those friends you thought you needed so Bare in mind the friend you departed still loves you greater than you know ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Rex~ I can very much relate to your poem~ Very nicely written~ Marie~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rex, I too can relate, how beautifully stated. -SEA |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks Marie and Sea The reading of it now sure beats the writing of it then. Rex |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
Parting can be such a painful experience. You captured it beautifully. Thank God those feelings don't last forever. Very nice. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Parting is never easy. Welcome to Passions, Rex! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You are all very kind thankyou and that card you sent me, Denise, you are very thoughtful. Rex |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
very sad, it does the pain good to write it out.... |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Welcome, Rex. I just wrote a poem on almost exactly the same thing, only it's not nearly as good as this. ~Gene |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Was there once as well, and it's reading nice work as yours that brings back the best memories. DH |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
If only love would say goodbye at the same time to each concerned.. HUGS Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Ah the pain is so fresh in this. I remember it well, although my memory does not creep back anymore. There is more unhappy memories then happy ones for me, my happiness lays forward. I hope that yours will as well. Welcome to Passions! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks everyone ... this event took place about 23 years ago and I'm now on my second and very happy marriage of hmmm 19 I think years ... wife better not read this or I'm cooked ! |
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