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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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The Writer His words sing to me some sweet sorrowful song bound by profound beauty he melts this glacial heart polarized for so long Wanting to envelop me in eiderdown so warm, this poet I shall never see my mind’s eye creation writing from a snow storm I am what your dreams hold hazy hum inside your head A gypsy’s tale to unfold A whisper in your ear that slips into your bed So, you would be a new mystery, but love, I’ve been one all along. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful with a touch of mystery! I like that! Very nice, Corinne! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne- This is lovely. I like mysterious people. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Corinne - This is another incredibly great poem from you. Your last line is very sensuous. It reminds of your other poem that finished with, "Darlin, if you only knew." You have a way of leaving the reader with held breath and expectation. Great writing, Corinne. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
This is a very touching poem. Keep it up |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise, Marge and Buffpimp! LngJohn, your generous words inspire me, as well as so many others in this forum! Corinne |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, I really like this one, Corinne! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, this is very beautiful poem, you really are a mystery. .......... I sought the end of a rainbow, for the gold that it might hide. But when I saw those fire red locks, my heart had stopped inside. Parker |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice poem, nice finale... I enjoy your work, Corinne...  |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
well done Corinne.....and so nice to see a face with the words!! Robert |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Balladder, Nan and Robert! Parker, where have you been all my life? LOL Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love to open up your poetry, because I never know what I am going to find, but I know I won't be dissapointed  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Corinne this is BEAUTIFUL! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dear Hoot_Owl_M, thank you! LOL I had to laugh, because I know my poems are all over the map right now, and I feel like apologizing for that sometimes. But, I'm glad that you are never disappointed! I always find inspiration in your poems! Although, I must admit that I wish we could guide you out of your sadness, too! I guess we all wish to see our friends happy and wish we could help. I'm sure that when one of my "dark" poems hits this board, people read it and can't think of a thing to say! Dear Echo, Thank you very much! Corinne |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And Corinne! You haven't been back to my "ode" on that naughty forum either?...Ya gotta just start playin' more often gal... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, I've been living in this snow storm all my life waiting to write poems for someone like you. Its my wishfull thinking, but I want to think this poem is just for me... Poet, snow bound country, slips into my bed... (oh there I go dreaming again).  Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
My dearest Toe, back to the "Ode", you should go! If you dare, let your fingers take you there! Parker, hon, you take my breath away! Perhaps we should run away together, what do you say? Corinne |
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