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Open Poetry #5

thoughts of you

Smore
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since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-01-29 11:31 PM

Thoughts of you run through my mind
Leaving everything else behind

I imagine you stay with me through the day
Just looking at each other, theres nothing to say

You kissed me so sweet and looked in my eyes
Whispered words of forever and promised no lies

You then took my hand and you led the way
You said,"Come with me I have something to say."

You whispered "I love you," and then stroked my
face
But then I awoke and of you I saw no trace

My heart yearns so much for you
Perhaps someday yours will too.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-01-29 11:35 PM

Smore, this is so tender and sweet. I have felt that way too. I think lots of us here can relate. Beautiful! -SEA

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-30 12:04 PM

This is both sad and beautiful. Well done, Smore! Very lovely!

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-01-30 03:43 AM

Smore-
Lovely. Just lovely.
~*Marge*~

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