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For All The Times........
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For All The Times........ |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
For all the times you made me cry For all the times I wondered why For all the times you looked away There was so much more left to say. For all the times you cut me down For all the times you made me frown For all the times you left me alone I waited all day by the phone. For all the times you broke my heart For all the times I fell apart For all the times you pushed me out I was left with all this doubt. For all the times I couldn't sleep For all the times my thoughts ran deep For all the times you left me cold It was only you I wanted to hold. For all the times you held me near For all the times I felt so dear For all the times I wanted more You left me feeling like a whore. For all the times we could have talked For all the times away you walked For all the times you left me numb How could I ever have been so dumb? For all the times you were my friend For all the times I was left to fend For all the times you were so stern And yet I find I still don't learn. For all the times I gave up men For all the times I took you back again For all the times I took your side What was the point, you only lied. For all these times I gave you my best And now I'm left with all this mess Through all these times I needed your touch But now I realise, I wanted too much. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Julie. Very pain filled poem. You have expressed it well. I look forward to more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Denise, thanks, the card was fantastic! There is so much more inside of me just waiting to spill out into the family!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great! You write it and I'll read it!! Denise |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello and Welcome Julie  )) I enjoyed this poem of yours and look forward to reading more - I too,have only just found this site - I think it's a fantastic find )) Keep smiling - Roniece ) |
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Laurel Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 22 |
Sometimes love can break your heart. I like this one! |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Roniece - thanks for stopping by. I already feel at home here, I can't seem to stay away though.......not that I would want to! Laurel - I'm working hard at not letting it break, keep your fingers crossed for me! Glad you liked it. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good poem..glad to see it brought to the top!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions  |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow! I've been there. jeez.......you took me back to some painful memories.......excellent writting! Welcome home!-SEA |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
For all the times she made replies, It's my turn to give jascanvey a mighty Hi. ------ It was nice of you to reply 36 times before making your first post. This is a wonderful entrance into the forums. ~Gene |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jascanvey, Welcome and I enjoyed the poem. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
THATS A GOOD POAM I FEEL LIKE YOUR TELLING MY STORY. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Poet de vine and Hoot owl I am honoured that you have read my poem. Sea - I think you and I have a lot in common! I can relate to all of your poems I have read over the last week or so! Gene and Seymour - thanks for the welcome, glad you liked it. just another - I look forward to reading some of your poems. Welcome! Be warned - your telephone line will be constantly engaged now you have found this site!! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very beautiful poem, I've been there too. I'm first now beginning to find that I can't find someone else to define my happiness, I have to find my own first, its been a tough lesson. Good luck to you and welcome. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Thanks for the welcome and kind words Gemini. |
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