Open Poetry #5 |
Writes the Poet |
Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Writes the Poet A luminous thought in a pure heart that is all you are A resonance sought and a lure wrought to light my mind’s flare Innocence caught and nearer brought from a distance, from afar and essence come in bout through a door’s route one was left ajar In brilliance and light to pour upon light blazing burns my heart and essence bright to peer at, my sight The Poet starts to write Safwan Arekat http://magicboat.com [This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Captivating, Safwan, from the title to the ending line. One can sense the timing in your words and verse. Very lovely. Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Safwan- What a lovely thought you've written of. Wonderful and welcome to Passion's. I went to your homepage ... a 'magic boat' indeed. Hope to see more of your work shared here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very beautiful I was diappointed that I couldn't open your home page. Liz |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, this is a very deep poem. Welcome to Passions! Nathan |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Thanks Everyone, Happy to be here Safwan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Safwan! Very lovely! Denise |
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