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Loosing the Oscar
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Loosing the Oscar |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Loosing the Oscar The bitter sweet is what you crave As an actor on stage, commitment is the role you play A bleeding heart of longing love Sent to me from heaven's above And playing deep, you do succeed In a dreamers heart, you find your lead Take open stock to call your own Take a lonely heart into your home Weaving and dodging the deadly seed You mustn't stray from make believe As you act out, each and every line So real it is with in my mind Like talking to a big brick wall Your feelings get hurt, as you recall Each line and verse you did recite To get us through the lonely nights And when the house got in your way You go, with out a word to say So alone again this heart retreats Back in to its sleepless sleep Where dark and dreary thoughts reside The truth of never having you by my side My own free will , long gone away Leaving me here with a role to play Ashamed am I to face the truth Now in years, far beyond my youth A dreamers lover I have been Awaken now, as all dreams must end Oh Lord, how I wanted to believe There was true feelings in these parts you conceived But as I look back over lines again, I realize this is a role I could never win © tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I liked this poem -- wise imagery and truthful messages. One question: did you mean Losing the Oscar? Either way, cool title. Mike |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
What a poem, so sad. The bleeding heart such strong line well done Tori The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So sad and so beautiful....Tori, this is an excellent piece.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and sad. Well done, Tori! Nice to see your face! Denise |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks guy's..!! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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